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Archbishop Victoria de'Aron by Keleus Archbishop Victoria de'Aron by Keleus
Архиепископ Виктория дель’Арон
- Верховная Жрица Вироуса Винда. Высокая приятной наружности женщина. Ее серебристые волосы и темный оттенок лица, а также алые глаза выдавают в жрице кровь темных эльфов. Она предпочитает носить элегантные платья. Женщина она разговорчивая и добрая, но редко рассказывающая о своем прошлом. Известно, что раньше она была жрицей другого бога, но отринула тот путь. И после нескольких лет скитаний нашла свое место в церкви Мистического Громовержца.

Archbishop del'Aron Victoria
- High Priestess of Virous Wind. She is high and handsome woman. Her silver hair and a dark shade of the skin and red eyes showing the blood of dark elves. She prefers to wear elegant dresses. She talkative and kind, but rarely talked about his past. It is known that before she was a priestess of another god, but rejected that way. And after several years of wandering finds its place in the Church of the Mystic Thunder.

Photoshop CS5 with wacom bamboo.
Any suggestions/critique would be most appreciated.
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:iconmathota:
This is clearly an outstanding piece of excellent skill and design.
The cemetery of the headpiece and design of the the bottom of the gown gives off a distinctly religious feel, as do her sandals and feather collar.
The pendant is very distinct and looks slightly out of place in the middle view but in the "activated" view it fits perfectly. The intricate wings are an excellent touch of detail and give the impression of both power and majesty, perfect for a high priestess.

Now for the negatives, of which their are few.
The feathers are a nice touch on the collar, but they are an isolated idea and I feel that continuing down the back of the for a short while, or reappearing at the sleeves of the garment would be preferable, but this issue is mainly a matter of opinion.
Despite the description her hair seems more bone white than silver and this just doesn't suit and significantly lowers the images impact.
In the activated image her are redder but I feel this isn't noticeable enough and that they could be brighter or glowing to show her red eye trait more clearly.
In the activated view her hands, hair and headpiece are glowing, but I feel an opportunity has been missed that the amulet isn't glowing also, and that the insignias on the gown, particularly the lower parts, don't also light up as if this were to happen it would draw attention to these details and give significantly more impact to the image.

This is excellent work and I hope I have been of some assistance.

~mathota~
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:iconjitar:
Jitar Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Няшненько :)
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Keleus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Забавно, никогда ее так не воспринимал)))
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:iconmathota:
Mathota Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Um... What game is this project for?
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:iconkeleus:
Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am a student at the Institute of the Faculty of game graphics. This character was my semester assignment. But I developed this character for forum rpg(D&D) game PhoenixRPG.
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Mathota Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Ah, thank you!
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A-n-j-u-n-A Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ААА.... крутотень!)))
на манифесте прям день эльфов вышел)))
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Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ага))) Хотя техника тоже была. Так чтобы была у нас прекрасная атмосфера магопанка))) У тебя тоже отличная вышла. зафавил ее.
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Faithfeather Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
very pretty design
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:iconkeleus:
Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot)
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Faithfeather Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
your welcomes :3 *showers you with brownies*
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:iconmathota:
Mathota Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
I think you forgot to render the back view.
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:iconkeleus:
Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not really, but in reality a don't make the side view, it's worse.
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Mathota Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Fair enough. :)
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Ningeko16 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is simply beautiful!

zdorova! tee hee
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Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you like her)))
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Ningeko16 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
tee hee 0u0 well it's awesome why wouldn't i?
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:iconera-7:
ERA-7 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
что препод сказал? =)
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:iconkeleus:
Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Сказал хорошо))) Ваня, вчера на марафоне у вас очень помог перерисовать ее более грамотно.
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ERA-7 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
кстати, как тебе марафон сам? Меня не было, поэтому не знаю как он прошел(
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Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Потрясающе, очень понравилось. Получилось так, что мы все были в диалоге и помогали друг другу, Ваня тоже не отставал, как всегда был нарасхват! ))))
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ERA-7 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
о, а напиши поподробнее 8) там кроме Вани были еще преподаватели?
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Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Нет, не было вроде. Хотя не понял, был парень один - он флеш делал, возможно он тоже был преподаватель, в любом случае показал несколько классных вещей, которые появились в новых версиях программы. Вообще ребята по большей степени были умелые, им бы на Адванс курс пойти))) Там бы они раскрылись полностью. Закончили чуть раньше только, но тут людям просто разъехаться надо было.
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ERA-7 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
а, это Ледин Сергей значит был) он инструктор по флэшу и программированию)
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Keleus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ну он интересно рассказал, может быть, ближе к весне запишусь к нему. А то я пять лет флешом занимался, а он мне столько нового показал - это круто.
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